
https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2026/03/25/its-thursdays-six-sentence-story-blog-hop-64/
Ahh…in the rustling wind I hear stories, lots of ’em, and they’re all 6-sentence perfection. Click the link above, if you’re unfamiliar with this weekly writing challenge hosted by Denise. You’ll find all the information there, meet the crowd of fine authors–and be invited to write your own 6-sentence story–Yes! Her briliant prompt this week is “MARCH”!
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March is widely considered a mercurial month, and Lorelei had followed suit: tearful, insatiable passion, wistful sighs, singing as she cooked, and distant–all in one day, or worse, within an hour.
But she was calm as Richard pointed to the vacant school, where his first contact in the town had been with the last remaining teacher–who’d seemed normal, friendly enough; the teacher and students were gone, and the building now served as an all-purpose auditorium for town meetings, rummage sales, receptions and various exhibitions.
“Tell Judd about the kids”, Lorelei urged, “how, prior to your arrival, there were no more children being born.”
Judd watched Richard’s face for any ‘tells’ of dissembling or outright lies–Lorelei’s request seemed to rock him just a bit, but he shrugged, grinned, said, “small town, ageing population–there wasn’t anything to offer young families looking for a place to settle, after the last graduating class moved on”–he shrugged again.
Aware the detective side of his brain was tracking, Judd took up where Lorelei left off: “wasn’t there considerable illegal drug business going on under cover of the fortune teller’s shop…she was allegedly the middle man; and the spate of suicides–teenagers; and a murdered girl, also allegedly connected to the fortune teller…her trade in love potions and curses, etc–am I right?”
Richard’s expression became strained–“perhaps you’ve acquired more information than I possess, Judd; I came here after all the ‘alleged’ was past history–and I was targeted by folks who couldn’t let go of myths and mysteries so convoluted that they were suspicious of a stranger coming in, quite innocently, to write a book that had nothing whatever to do with their town and residents–I only wrote about them after I’d narrowly escaped death; now, I’d really like to show you some of the nicer points here, if you’re interested”…to which Judd backed off, smiled an apology, and gestured for Richard to lead on.
~ Cale
A drug operation going on in a small town with an aging population? The words 60’s era commune comes to mind! hehe
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Thanks for reading, Violet.
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I’m not sure I fully understand what’s going on with the town yet, but it makes me curious. I can understand Lorelei and her shifts in being though….
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Thanks for reading, and your comment.
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Well, that was an interesting tidbit about all those older people in that town and what happened to them. I also liked what Violet said. And now I’m just thinking about where we stay now – aging population… very few kids… and what we did back then… (no comment). I’m just saying. 😉
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Thanks for reading, Chris!
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Richard has his hands full! Wonderful six sentence story!
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He’s a pastor, he should be used to it.
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I am glad to hear there are nice points about the town.
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Every town has good and bad aspects–nothing is perfect on Earth.
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It may be the trouble with drugs caused many young families to move away, but you can’t get away from the problem now. The story is keeping me wanting to know more.
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You’re very kind to stay interested, Mimi, I appreciate you!
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